How to Write
a Sizzling Recruitment Ad (Part 1)
Dr. Dave
Barnett
If you want to
learn how to write a good recruitment ad, spend some time reading and
analyzing recruitment ads. Find last Sunday's classifieds. Turn to
the "Sales" section. As you browse, notice the ads which immediately
draw your eye. Why do you read some and skip over others? Do some ads
seem to have more credibility than others? If so, why?
Size
Matters
Before candidates
ever read a word of your ad, they've already formed an opinion of you
and your company from the appearance and size of your ad. When it
comes to advertising, the media is the message.
People
instinctively look first at what is largest on the page. It's the way
our brains work. It's also the way most classifieds work. Larger
notices get placed first. So, when both size and position work for
you, your ad screams, "I'm important. Pay attention to
me."
As important as
size is, it's critically important not to cram too much information
into the ad. Empty space is more attractive to the brain than
clutter. Notice the use of "white space" in employment ads. If you
must include details, be sure your headline is easy to read and
attention-getting.
The Art of
Advertising
In addition to
size, larger ads attract more attention because they often contain
artwork or photos. The human eye is drawn instinctively to faces
first. You may not have celebrity endorsements, but you don't need
famous faces to draw attention to your ads. Any photo of smiling real
people will work.
One company
tripled the response rate to its ad by simply adding its company
logo. Artwork gives a reason for white space. The human brain finds
symbols easier and more intriguing than words.
Communicate Values
to Needs
So far, we haven't
said anything about the content of your recruitment ad. In my
opinion, the copy is secondary to the size and attractiveness of the
ad. But once you've got the reader's attention, your ad must "sell"
the reader.
Why does anybody
buy anything? Because you fill a need with something the customer
feels has value. Therefore, writing the winning recruitment ad must
identify to readers how your values and uniqueness will meet their
needs.
What's your
selling style? Are you a charming back-slapper, or do you like to be
more careful and analytical about things? Is your style to be
empathetic and concerned, or do you hit the bottom line quickly? Your
style of interacting with your salespeople is a very important piece
of the puzzle. Your style dictates the values you bring to recruiting
a winning sales team. Your style should shape the kind of ad campaign
you run as a reflection of your values.
How Recruitment
Ads Communicate Values
If you know your
style, you know the styles you will likely work best with and those
that will frustrate you. You can then design words and pictures,
which appeal to deep pre-conscious needs of those you want to
attract.
Here are some
basic themes, which capture the attention and communicate at a very
deep level to the basic drives of salespeople.
If you need a
candidate to impress others by telling your story, attract performers
with appeals to recognition, prestige, and glamour. Feature pictures
of young, energetic, well dressed, laughing people. Always start the
ad with the word "YOU." Appeal to their sense of fun. Position your
opportunity as prestigious with lots of opportunity for recognition
and enjoyment of life.
Example:
World-renowned product looking for energetic, dynamic, free thinker
to market to prestigious businesses.
If you need a
self-starting candidate who doesn't need much oversight, attract
commanders which appeals to control, promotion, and privilege.
Commanders are attracted to negative advertising. You'll get their
attention by starting your ads with negative words such as "Don't,"
"You can't," and "Never." Appeal to their sense of duty and
suspiciousness. Position your opportunity as demanding with the
opportunity for advancement.
Example: Don't
read this ad unless you're one tough-minded SOB who can handle
responsibility that would destroy most salespeople.
One note of
caution: be ready for the kind of people who will answer an ad like
this.
If you need a
candidate who is careful and conscientious, attract analyzers with
ads that ask questions rather than make statements. Include lots of
facts and figures, graphs and charts, maps and details. The smaller
the print the better. Position your opportunity as a problem to be
solved. Be sure to mention benefits and company
stability.
Example: Are you
looking for salary plus bonus plus benefits? We're a solid, stable
company looking for an expert problem solver.
If you need
candidates to build relationships and service existing accounts,
appeal to empathizers by emphasizing teamwork and personal caring in
your ads. Use words like "us" and "our." Soften the hard
edges.
Example: Our
small, close-knit team needs a caring individual to service existing
accounts and invite new clients to partner with our
company.
Be careful to
avoid mentioning anything in your ad about race, religion, color,
gender, age, physical abilities, or other factors which may be
considered discriminatory. Not only are such biases illegal in the
workplace, they are also bad for business. Be sure any and all
requirements outlined in your recruitment ad are clearly job-related.
Keep the focus on what people DO, not what they ARE. If you satisfy
these requirements you qualify to end your ad with the phrase, "Equal
Opportunity Employer."
Editor's Note:
Watch for the second part of our recruiting tips in two weeks, with
Communicating Your Uniqueness of business and the "Action Lines"
necessary to create great recruiting ads.
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